Last night, I used my computer to listen music. I like to listen music. There are certain music I listen when I want to concentrate. One of the music I listen is “Arthur’s theme (Best That You Can Do).” I like this song because of the way the singer sings this song. I forget the name of the singer, but his voice is very clear and beautiful. If I have time, I want to look for other songs the singer sings. The tempo is good, too. Its tempo is slow, but has a climax part which is just right tempo for me to listen while studying. It makes me relax and be calm. Also, I like the musical instruments used in this song. They fits with the tempo of the song. I don’t know much about the musical instruments, so I can’t say what musical instruments are used. But, it is really good. There is one part that one of the musical instruments have solo. I think it is saxophone, but I am not sure. I like this part. It makes me concentrate.
Last week, I was writing a story for homework and it is continuing. I had the almost same homework in October or November. The only difference is that I may write 600 words longer than the previous homework. I am glad that the maximum amount of the words is raised. I had a difficulty with editing a story to make the words below 1000.
There is a homework that I have to write a story. This is a second time for me to write a story as homework. The teacher told us that we will make one story per quarter. So, I have 3 stories including this one to make this grade. Last year, I made about one or two stories. It was not bad, and there were no limit for the amount of the words I can write. But, for this grade’s stories, I have limit for the amount of words. Last quarter, I may write maximum of 1000 and a little more. For this quarter, I may write 1600 and a little more. I may write longer than the last writing. It is very helpful because in order to make better writings, I have to add information to make the stories and characters fun and natural. If there are not enough details, the plot and the characters don’t seem natural. It is important to make the characters seem natural and act as humans. I prefer more words than less words. So, I am glad that the maximum amount of words is raised for 600 words. But still, my story is twice the amount of maximum. So, I have to shorten it a lot and I think it will take much time.
The negative part of shortening the story is that I have to delete many sentences that I took a lot of time to think and write. I don’t want to delete some of the words and parts because they all have some kinds of meanings to it. Some parts I already decided to delete contains a part that show the characters’ personalities. But, I have to do it anyway. So, I will try to make my story short and better.